Deep in the woods there was a man
named Eka. Eka was a young man who lived in the woods his entire life. He knew
nothing else other than the woods so all he could imagine about life was in the
trees that surrounded him. The woods were his life. He loved every inch of
them. As he grew up he traveled all around and up and down the various places
that the trees could offer him, he met many wanders trading them directions for
stories of the great and marvelous cities and the great men that dwelt within
the walls. Though his fascination of the cities inspired him, Eka lived for the
trees. As he grew up he learned he needed to be good with either a sword or a
bow to ward off any dangerous predators that would come near him. Eka chose the
way of the bow and as he grew up he practiced and practiced with the bow. For
hours every day he would shoot, but he was not very good. He wanted to give up
but he couldn’t do it, for his own life he had to get good with the bow.
One morning as the sun was coming
up he heard a man walking through the forest whistling a tune as he went. Eka
was curious, thinking that the man must be lost he went to him to offer
directions, but as he looked upon the man’s face he felt a new sort of
curiosity come over him. He had seen this man’s face before. He wasn’t someone
who came walking through the woods, he never forgets the faces of the people he
meets, he was a face on a picture that someone had given a long time ago.
“What’s your name stranger?” Eka yelled
out to man strolling through his forest, “You need to some directions?” he
yelled again but only silence was answered in return. “HEY!” Eka yelled even
louder this time to get his attention as he ran over to the strange man. “What
is your name and do you need directions?!?!” Eka yelled in the old mans face.
“My name is not of your business
and no I do not need directions” the old man said to him in a calm manner and
continued to walk on past Eka.
“I wont
have it, you are in my woods, I demand your name” Eka said sternly, “Why have I
seen your face before on a picture with a bow and arrow” He questioned him.
“Ooohh, so
you are a bow man are you? My name is Dro, I am a master archer back in the
city” Dro said in a still voice.
“A bow
master? Will you teach me? I have been practicing for years, and I need to be
better while I live out here. Please, teach me!” Eka said eagerly to Dro.
“No” Dro
answered.
“What do
you mean ‘No’” Eka questioned.
“I mean, no”
and Dro walked away leaving Eka behind without another word.
Ekalavya Cutting Off His Thumb
The Mahabharata
Authors Note:
I really enjoyed this part of the story so I wanted to focus my story on it. I wanted to make the story something kind of like Jungle book or Tarzan, so I made Ekalavya into a man who has only ever known the forest. I also just shortened the name of the characters so that I could make them a little easier.
I really enjoyed this part of the story so I wanted to focus my story on it. I wanted to make the story something kind of like Jungle book or Tarzan, so I made Ekalavya into a man who has only ever known the forest. I also just shortened the name of the characters so that I could make them a little easier.
For me, Ekelavya was one of the most interesting aspects of the entire Mahabharata, even if it didn’t get much attention in the grand scheme of things—so I was really glad to see you give it the spotlight treatment. It was interesting getting to see it from Eka’s point of view for once; his background with the woods was a nice way to flesh out his desperation to master the bow. Also, the way you varied your paragraph lengths and included naturalistic dialogue was great, and made for a pleasant, smooth read. Nice job!
ReplyDeleteHi Tyler! When I first read your story, I immediately think of Tarzan (but then you say that in the author's note as well haha). I am curious what happens to Eka that has him live in the wood? How and where he got his bow? Overall, I enjoy your story and wonder if you will write a sequel for this story? That will be super interesting.
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