Long ago, in a nation far, far
away, a man his wife and his brother are lost in a vast forest. Waiting and
waiting for the year to come when they can go back to the city of their
fathers.
10 years
since the banishment into the wilderness the three hero’s sit around a fire
talking and gathering close to stay warm. The fire crackles and the owl hoot as
the night rolls on.
“Its been
10 years Rama” said Lakshman, “10 years since the banishment, I’m tired of
this”.
“I was the
one banished, Lakshman, you are free to go home” Rama replied as they ate the
food they had caught for the day.
“I could
never leave you and Sita out here while I live in freedom, I don’t have that in
me. I may hate it out here, but I love you. I love you both, and I will never
desert you here” Lakshmana answered as he stared transfixed into the fire. It
grew quiet and the three sat silent. As the night rolled on and Rama and Sita
fell silently to sleep up next to a tree while Lakshmana took the first watch
of the night. It was a quiet night. Nothing more than owls hooting, the fire
crackling, and the occasional wrestling of Rama and Sita moving in their sleep.
The night rolled on and Lakshmana woke Rama up to take the next watch and
rested his head next to the tree in order to get some sleep.
The next
day came to soon for Lakshman. It was early in the morning, first light when
they would wake up for their day. They needed to catch all their meals every
day, and try to find some extra meals as they hunted. Rama looked over at
Lakshman, and with a smirk on his face said to him, “You ready to have a great
day, Lakshman”.
“With a
tired look, Lakshmana mumbled to Rama, “Oh, shut up, Rama, it’s too early for
your nonsense”. Lakshmana got up off the ground, washed his face with some cold
water from a bowl next to them and grabbed his bow. They moved together in a
line, Rama in front, Sita, and then Lakshmana following up the rear guard. They
came upon a new forest they had not crossed before with many wild beasts
roaming about having not seen the three yet.
Suddenly
Lakshmana stood tall and looked all around. “What is it, brother?” Rama
questioned Lakshmana looking frightened but strong. Before Lakshmana could
answer a Rakshasa roared heavily at the three and sprinted toward them.
Grabbing Sita in his large arms, he ran past the others yelling and crying at
the top of his lounges. He yelled wildly at Rama and Lakshmana, crying out how
he was the king of the forest. Rama grabbed multiple arrows in his bow and shot
them all at the rakshasa, each of which pierced. The wild beast dropped Sita
and ran after the other two, turning his entire wraith on the brothers.
Grabbing the brothers, one in each hand, he squeezed, but the two immediately
broke the arms of the rakshasa and he dropped them to the ground. Rama stomped
his foot the rakshasa throat and yelled to Lakshmana, “You dig the pit”.
Lakshmana
dug as fast as he could with his hoe and Rama threw the beast into the pit.
Then they began to rejoice, for victory was theirs. And no longer did they need
to worry, the largest and evilest of beast in that forest had been vanquished,
and the three were then again free to travel and hunt and sleep well at night.
The fight between Rama and the rakshasa
The Ramayana Sources used: M. Dutt, R. Dutt, Gould, Griffith, Hodgson,
Mackenzie, Nivedita, Oman, Richardson, and Ryder.
Author's note:
I decided to focus on one of my favorite parts of the story, the Rakshasa. I like this part mainly because well, I am a guy and I kinda like battle scenes. But I also wanted to bring a new perspective, that of Lakshmana, yet still being a 3rd person omniscient story. I just liked to make the main character Lakshmana.
I like your story, Tyler.
ReplyDeleteIt reminds me of some of the childhood stories that I have heard before - killing the dragon to save the villagers. It is amazing to me how each religion / group / society has their own belief about gods, dragons and spiritual figures. It is amazing that no matter how old these epics are, there is always a valuable lesson that can be brought out of each story.
This is a great story, Tyler. From just reading your intro, the first line of your story, "Long ago, in a nation far, far away, a man his wife and his brother are lost in a vast forest", sounds like something that may happen to you at some point in the future, hahaha. I think it's great that unintentionally this story became personal to you. It included elements of friendship, human rights, travel, adventure, and of course an epic battle, which are all awesome aspects. I look forward to seeing the other awesome stories you come up with in this course!!
ReplyDeleteTyler, you are a fantastic story teller. I really enjoyed the way that you smoothly retold the story but yet it didn’t feel forced or a stretch. I guess being a pastor makes you great at telling stories because that is a very easy way to relate with your audience be they in the seats or reading your story. Great job on the illustrations of getting ready in the morning. I could see them all in mind, getting ready in the morning together.
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